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January 30
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Now, Shadow was a normal kid in a normal school like any other kid. Though, something happened one day that made everything change. Something that was bad, very very bad...

*5 minutes before IT happened*

"Ugh when is class going to end" thought shadow, he was in social studies. "this is the same thing we go over everyday either we read something in a book or we just write like crazy as if this was language arts" he said to his friend which was sitting next to him, his name was Carlos. "ya i get what your saying, SHH here comes the teacher!" Carlos said as they both started reading when the teacher walked by them. Shadow couldn't get any bored then he was and wished that something happened, anything, well he got his wish sooner then expected. A very loud alarm went off and all of the students have never herd such a thing. The teacher, who was looking horrified, told the students to get under there desks and cover there heads.
Shadow did so and the last thing her herd before he blacked out, was a loud scream of wind and a huge bang. When he awoke he didn't remember where he was, everything around him was different. there was fire around and the building had collapsed. Shadow suddenly noticed his friends body a couple of feet away from him, motionless.... "c-carlos? carlos are you ok?" shadow said as he got closer to Carlos and shook him. "no he cant b-be dead...." Shadow had figured out a missile must of hit the school and killed his friend but who had this missile come from? and why? With these questions needing answers shadow got up ignoreing the pain in his legs, chest, and arms and started walking out of the rubble and to his house. "huh? where is everyone...?" shadow kept walking to his house alone, no one was around.
    Shadow got to his house after stubbleing a few times from the pain in his legs but managed to get inside. "m-mom? grandma?" the house was deserted too....where had everyone gone? and why did they leave everything behind? Shadow got to the loveseat and opened his laptop hopeing the internet was working which was non-likely. supriseingly it did work and shadow went first to a news website. "missile attack on school? the attack was only here? but why? grr" he opens another tab and went on chatango to talk to his friends about this.


To be continued...                                                          
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Ok ^^ i got the first chapter up. please give feedback i feel like no ones reading the past few things i posted. also i have no special plan to post every chapter on a certain day like some people do. so i may upload a chapter one day from now or a month who knows depends on the feedback i get bai.
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~mfox334O4 Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist
FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELZ

I'mma read more~!
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im still working on the second one
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~mfox334O4 Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist
ah
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:iconshadow56333:
but a little bit of it was posted
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*YoshiTheWolf Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
-claps- this is awesome :3 i hope the next chapter we get to see him chating with his friends on chatango, i want to see what their like
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Thanks ^^ i love how im getting this insperation because i have had tried to write a story before but i always kept getting writers block
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*YoshiTheWolf Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
np, and cool, but are we going to see him chat with his friends?
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*YoshiTheWolf Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
yay, cant wait to see who they are :3
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:3 bet you cant guess what happens after he gets off the chat
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